*Slow clap* Well. Done.
I was a bit nervous to read the "final" version as I've become rather invested in your process.
I can say, without reservation, this version rings like crystal - my favorite of all the Hail Iduns.
Thank you for your work on this; and particularly for your inclusion of the community. It has been an inspiring process to watch and participate in.
May you and yours be blessed. :)